I held a screening in which I received feedback from 18 students in my media class. I asked them two questions which they answered on Google forms. The two things I wanted to know were the strengths and weaknesses of my music video from my first edit.
Overall my main strengths were that the editing was really good and people liked how it was syncronised to the beat of the music. The audience liked the colour correction that I used to distinguish happiness to sadness and the audience also liked my camera work.
Overall the main elements that the audience told me to improve were some of the shots are at a canted angle which doesn’t make sense with the narrative being shown. They also thought the narrative was quite repetitive at some points.